I havent seen these in a while
An Oddworld remake-ish type game.
You have a whole lot to impove.
The controls were really fidgety and there should be atleast some form of instructions. Heres an idea: why not make a number of ingame screens that teach you how to move about and what to do.
For the graphics department, it was pretty good, but you have to clear some things up first. Do NOT make another Doom 3. Waaay too dark in some places. (Also, the text was off at those aquarium looking things)
An intro with just lets say "snapshots" would be great to tell the story beforehand.
Sounds wise, you still need better and more sounds. Some form of ambient or light DNB track would really give the game a good atmosphere and make the game more enjoyable.
Are you going to add other creatures that you have to help?
GJ