You shouldn't bark at people who creatively criticize your work...
As everyone else had said, try to use more frames per animation, the story wasn't much of a story, and a loading bar wouldn't hurt.
Furthermore, the dialog wasn't that clear as to where it was coming from and there were overall gaps in both your animation and dialog which broke the pacing of the movie
Do not let this discourage you however. Just the fact that you actually took the time I take it means that you want to do this, so as a Tip for an upcoming animation: Make a bunch of simple motions or something as a compilation kind of deal and ask people to review your animation itself. Could help.
And don't bark at people.
Thank you. I will take these suggestions and try to improve.
Although I have never played God of War 2, this was freaking hilarious!
I hope to see more of this in the future
It feels so much like a Knox claymation...
The picture was always real blurry, so you might wanna do something about that or get a better camera.
Other than that I think you have potential.
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