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[Saber Level 1 Demo]

I havent seen these in a while

An Oddworld remake-ish type game.
You have a whole lot to impove.
The controls were really fidgety and there should be atleast some form of instructions. Heres an idea: why not make a number of ingame screens that teach you how to move about and what to do.

For the graphics department, it was pretty good, but you have to clear some things up first. Do NOT make another Doom 3. Waaay too dark in some places. (Also, the text was off at those aquarium looking things)
An intro with just lets say "snapshots" would be great to tell the story beforehand.

Sounds wise, you still need better and more sounds. Some form of ambient or light DNB track would really give the game a good atmosphere and make the game more enjoyable.

Are you going to add other creatures that you have to help?

GJ

Kreid responds:

since you asked about the creatures i might as well tell people the story.
Im only gunna say it once though...
You play as a slave who works in a factory, your character (Saber) notices that more and more of his fellow workers are disappearing, poor guy, so, instead of being a good little person and getting taken away, he decides to run away, after this level he doesn't die like the ending movie shows, instead he gets caught by a glider, a terodactyl like monster, anyway he is unconsious and he ends up in a tunneller cave, (as seen in the 'tunneller storage' room. Here he finds out that the slaves who was disappearing was being fused with tunnellers DNA/bodies IDK, to create the Kreid, (A.K.A. the guard he had to run away from) anyhoo after getting out of the cave he goes back to the factory (workers hell) with a new army of tunnellers and destroys the place, therefore freeing the tunnellers and his own race (still to be named). End of he basics lol.